在奖学金申请书中，申请人首先要介绍一下自己的毕业院校，如果学校是211重点大学最好，接着要介绍一下自己大学期间的成绩，同时还有语言成绩，这些基本情况只需要简单介绍，不需要多做解释。那么奖学金申请的重点是什么呢?主要通过各种方式介绍自己对申请专业的热爱和学习动机，同时还要表明自己有能力完成学业，并有在专业领域内取得成绩的'可能。学生在申请奖学金之前，必须要明确自己对申请专业的爱好程度，是否将该专业作为未来就业的方向。

确定专业以后，要看所申学校对奖学金的要求，如果选定了教授，则要多看看教授的研究方向和他的研究论文，有助于了解导师的喜好。这些准备工作都做好了就可以着手撰写奖学金申请书了。申请书要得体适宜，不要有伸手要钱的嫌疑，否则这样的申请信不如不写。最好巧妙地利用学校和老师的心理，让他们肯定你的成绩和能力，并且对你感兴趣。

奖学金申请书因人而异，但字数不需要太长，不要把它作为ps来写，容易弱化ps的作用，奖学金申请书字数应控制在600到800字符，用凝练简介的语言说清楚即可。

美国留学申请书篇2

1、避免谈论你的“私生活”。在你的美国申请文书写作里谈论男朋友和女朋友是一件很冒险的事情。招生官真能从你的感情生活里了解你本人吗？不能吧，而且很可能让招生官对你的文书失去兴趣。

2、避免谈论某些不道德行为。把你曾经考试作弊或者偷过一个糖果棒的丑事抖搂出来或许对证明你的悔改之心是个很好的话题，但还是不建议絮叨这些事情。或许招生官正在拿你跟另外一个为当地图书馆筹集了5000美元的申请者做比较，如果你写的是这样一个有问题的行为，那对不起了，这太容易决定谁去谁留了。

3、避免评论历史名人。对招生官来说，讨论历史上著名人物的文书是非常无聊的。他们也上过高中，早已经知道这些历史人物了。而且，招生官能从你描述的乔治华盛顿、居里夫人的字里行间知道你是怎样的人吗？

4、美国申请文书写作表达的一定要是‘关于你’的。你要表达的，是你认为有趣的或者是一段独特的经历。即使这篇文章提示要求你写别人或一个重要事件，记得招生委员会的根本目的是了解你，而不是写一段历史或你最近读过的一本书。

5、避免选择一个听起来不错但是你并不关心的话题。很多学生认为大学是想招收那些做了很多社区服务工作的学生，这是真实的，因为大学赞扬你为社区做贡献的行为。但是，这并不意味着你必须得写关于社区服务工作的事，尤其是当你觉得这些服务工作对塑造你自己没有起到重要的作用时，那就更没必要写了。其他话题也是如此。

6、让招生官读懂你。读到你的文书，招生官可能想知道你喜欢什么，不喜欢什么，你做了什么，你期望以后有什么成就。他们最想知道你在接下来的四年里能给他们的学校带来什么，你有兴趣参加什么活动，你是否是个潜在的领导者，你最想学什么。

美国留学申请书篇3

一、顾左右而言他，目标不明确

有些申请人在文书中没有很清晰地描述出自己的目标专业以及未来的研究方向和职业规划，而是对一些与专业无关的事情高谈阔论，让招生官看不到申请人对目标专业的理解和研究，必然以申请失败收场。

提醒：申请文书顾名思义就是要帮你获得申请结果的材料，那么这个申请必然要围绕一个专业来进行，这个专业就是你的目标专业。既然以这个专业为核心开展，那么我们的文书都要围绕着这个主题来体现。也就是说，在你的文书中要利用有效的文字去告诉招生官你在专业上有过怎样的建树，你以及你的推荐人对于你个人的专业研究潜力是怎样评价看待的。

二、脱离实际、弄虚作假、乱假设

个别同学把别人的科研实习经历都安在自己的身上，从材料上看，这个学生看似有着极为出色的背景，他也可能会被一个不错的大学录取甚至获得全奖，但是到校一学期后他的真实水平就会显现出来。美国大学对于这种弄虚作假的行为甚为愤慨，会责令其退学。

提醒：美国大学教授希望通过申请文书了解真实的你，而不是一个编造的虚假人物。因此我们要本着诚实的态度去写自己的申请文书。除此之外，千万不要在文书中假设太多，因为假设永远只是在一定条件允许的情况下才能成立。文书还是要回归实际，以强有力的客观依据让学校认识到你的实力。

三、信息主次不分、取舍不当

有些硕士项目的申请人在简历里的教育背景部分罗列出自己在初中和高中的学习经历，而在工作经历或研究经历部分，却一笔带过，没有对工作经历或研究经历进行任何详细的描述，这种主次不分、取舍不当的简历，很难得到美国名校招生官的青睐。

提醒：很多美国大学在筛选、录取申请人时，往往把简历放在第一位。因此，申请人，尤其是商科的申请人，在制作简历时一定要做到信息取舍得当。此外，很多申请人在文书中加入了对所申请专业的介绍，这种做法在某种程度上是可取的。但有些申请人从网上抄袭对于某个专业的介绍，并占据很大的篇幅，而对问题里职业规划部分却轻描淡写，草草带过，这显然非常不可取。因为这会让招生官认为申请人完全没有*思考过自己以后要从事什么职业，如何一步一步地实现规划的职业目标，觉得申请人和所申请的项目不匹配。

四、长篇大论、拖沓冗长

有申请人在写个人陈述的时候，思绪一打开就收不住，写完就超过1500字了。要知道，在招生官审核材料的最忙碌的阶段，过长的文章是没有人愿意也没有时间耐心读下去的。

美国留学申请书篇4

due to the comprehensiveness of china’s “reform and open” policies，economics plays an increasingly important role in the development of its global position. though more and more companies built，management of companies cannot catch up with the development of the companies. management is a burgeoning field in china，so i hope i can acquire more modern knowledge on management in england. the roots of my strong interest in business can be traced back to my childhood. my father was among the first of china’s new breed of modern entrepreneurs. as a young girl，it was inspirational hearing about his business ventures，and meeting the varied and interesting circle of entrepreneurs. my mother was also involved in business as an accountant，helping him with simple calculations. and so it was early in my life that i hoped i，also，would someday be able to enter the realm of business.

with the time of growing up，i preferred reading books to satisfy my curiosity. i never ceased to contemplate over the questions i encountered. subjects on business and management became a special fascination to me and my knowledge of psychology as well as interest in this field was increasing rapidly.

as a high school student in china，i had to concentrate on the college entrance examination (cee)，even so，books not related to the exams were never excluded from my life. unfortunately when sitting in the exam in june，20xx，i was so nervous that i didn’t score well in the cee exam. i enrolled in the department of computer science in zhejiang college of traditional chinese medicine. any attempt to persuade myself to focus on my major turned out to be a failure at the beginning of my college life. after several terms，i realized that i would never be interested in being a programmer or an engineer. at that moment，i lost my direction and objectives.

my persistence in reading saved me from the dark situation. as a matter of fact，i enjoyed reading the books included encyclopedia american，and some books about management by peter f.drucker. i began to notice something interesting：why some companies can produce more than others? why some company can sell more than others? why some companies can build up but others cannot when facing the same difficulties?

with the questions in my mind，i started to read many relevant books. i was lucky to read the book “jack：straight from the gut”by jack welch，in which john a. byrne makes a clear illustration that the management is important for a company. when i was a junior，i ran a bookshop by myself near my school. i should manage not only the finance in the shop but also the employees in my shop even made some strategies to enlarge the business in my shop to hold on the run the shop. from this，my interpersonal skills and the capacity in business has been greatly developed，definitely i was increasingly interested in what i was doing. by december，20xx，i had finally determined to take business management as my career instead of it. to accumulate more relevant knowledge，i strived to gain more practical work experience in some big companies.

fortunately，as a senior，i began by conducting an internship in the architecture company in zhejiang province. over six months，i worked as an assistant of the manager to harmonize the relationship between the different departments in this company and to draft some management system，which broadened my perspective of management conditions and business performance in different industries. the experience showed me that management is much more important than that of i thought in big companies. after graduation，i continued my work in this company. in may，20xx，the company offered me an opportunity to participate in an training program held by a famous management school. through in-depth discussions with teachers and students in the classes，they all encouraged me to pursue my future career in management field because of my intellectual ability and the brand new ideas i mentioned.

during the short period of training，i realized that pursuing a higher degree in management is a wise choice for me now. lancaster，with its excellence in management，represents the perfect fit for my needs. in your challenging environment，i can build the required foundation of knowledge related to management to achieve my goals. i am firmly convinced that your admission will be my first step of success. with this in mind，i hereby submit my application，and await your favorable reply.

美国留学申请书篇5

一、美国本科申请中主要使用两篇文书

1、commonapplication 上的通用文书，我们称之为主文书。

2、专业文书，用来表述自己为什么选择此专业，做过什么相关活动，以及与学校该专业的匹配度，我们称之为专业文书。

二、美国本科留学文书写作时得把握三个向度

1、立意要积极向上

2、有横向的对其他人的影响

3、要有纵向的自我剖析

这三个向度不一定是要均衡的，能具备两个以上，就是一篇积极表达申请者形象的文书。

对于有特长的学生，建议申请者直接写自己的特长。比如游泳运动员、演讲特长、参与重大项目，这些个性鲜明，对周围社区或社会产生过更大影响的申请者识别度很高，很容易从万千申请者中识别出来。

三、美国大学文书写作素材源于生活

在生活中做个有心人，依然可以补救活动上的劣势。比如有个学生打算申请经济学，但目前没有活动，而她接下来要参加支教活动，建议学生在学校所在的小村做简单的经济调查，比如人口的流动、农户的收支、村落的经济支柱产业等，都是对经济活动的一种认识，可以做为文书的好素材。还建议学生回顾自己家庭以往的收支情况和消费状况，并赋予这些事件以经济学意义，就弥补以前的经济学相关活动的缺失。生活是多面性的，只有从生活点滴中去培养学科视角，就一定会有收获和成就。

四、美国大学文书写作高于生活

美国本科文书是申请材料中的必要条件之一，但只凭几篇优秀的文书仍然不能保证被录取。gpa、toefl、sat、成绩单这些能让招生官一目了然看出申请者学术潜力的材料仍然不能忽视，尤其是中国学生所欠缺的活动经历，目前越来越受到空前的重视。而且参与各项活动是认识世界的必要途径，是“认识你自己”的契机，是产生成就和成果的途径，也是文书的来源之一，所以是申请中一个重中之重的部分，录取数据分析也印证着这一点。

只有真正做到面对自己的内心、面对自己的过去、并在实践中不断去突破自己，才能利用好文书这个唯一的自述的机会，将自己的个性、成就呈现给招生官，使自己的形象鲜活起来。而各学校的附加文书，如为何选择此学校，能给学校带来什么样的多样性，能从学校获得什么，都是在“认识你自己”之后，在了解学校资源的基础上，做出一个匹配性的文字说明。

美国留学申请书篇6

第一步：了解基本学制

美国的大学，除了较少的学校采用quarter制(一年有四个quarter )外，绝大多数都采用学期(semester )制，每年有两个学期，于8月底及1月份开学，分别称为秋季学期和春季学期。与中国的高中学制相匹配的是秋季学期，但因为申请截止日期和申请材料完备的问题，许多学生都没有办法申请到毕业当年的秋季学期。许多学校就设立春季学期，让学生多了一个入学的机会。

因为有了两个学期，所以美国大学都有申请截止日期。一般情况下为deadline和early decision两种。early decision通常在头一年的10月底至12月;deadline在1月到4月不定，多数学校集中在1月和4月，学生要按照学校的规定及时寄送申请材料。同时，还有一些学校采用了rolling制度，即不设定申请截止日期，若一个学生太晚申请，以致错过了秋季学期的申请时效，校方会自动将学生的申请资料延至招收春季班学生时再审核，这样不仅使得申请的学生从此不用担心学校截止日太早，对校方而言，在招生时也有较多学生可供筛选。

第二步：提供材料要全面

申请人需提供的材料包括：1、高中成绩单( transcripts)。要有中英文两份，加盖学校的公章;2、三封学校老师的推荐信( recommendations);3、由ets寄送的托福考试成绩;4、个人陈述(essay )。要选定主题，展现个人风格，幽默，还要诚恳，要表达出适应不同文化对您的意义。进而显示出如果您成为学校的一分子，将如何嘉惠其他同学;5、sat考试;6、财力证明;7、学校要求的申请费和填好的申请表格。

第三步：申请奖学金

美国大学吸引学生注意的地方就是奖学金。相对研究生来讲，本科的奖学金比较少。但是优秀的学生还是可以申请到的。主要考察的还是学生本人的综合素质和全面的能力。

第四步：签证注意

签证官的注意力主要放在三方面：

1、学习动机。申请人要让签证官明白自己求学的决心和为之所做的准备。

2、财力证明。申请人要说明自己有能力支付在美国学习和生活的费用。

3、回国理由。这是比较关键的地方，此时，申请人要说明自己在国内和国外的各种状况，从而肯定会回国发展。

美国留学申请书篇7

i was seven years old when i saw the ocean for the first time. my grandmother had invited me to visit her near okinawa, japan. i will never forget that encounter—the intense sun, the endless horizon, the infinite shades of blue that dissolved any boundary between sky and waves. and most of all, the secret of the water. swimming in those waters was like diving into a kaleidoscope, deceptively plain on the outside, but a show of colors on the inside, waiting to dazzle me, mesmerize me. those colors! coral reefs—pink, green, red, purple—covered the seafloor; streaks of sunlight illuminated them, the swaying water creating a dance of hues. and weaving in and out of the contours of coral swam brilliant fish that synchronized every movement with the water, creating one body, one living entity. i longed to join and flow with them to the music of the waves; that’s where i felt i belonged. and leaving was like parting home, not going home.

five years later, i returned. at first, all seemed to match my memory: the crystalline waters and that open horizon with the sun daring to come closer to earth. but the second i dove in, i knew my home had vanished…white. that’s all i could see around me: bone-white death. i couldn’t accept it. i kept swimming farther out, hoping to catch even the smallest hint of color. but there was no sign of that brilliant garden i remembered, just fragments of bleached coral. it was like looking down onto the aftermath of a war: a bombed city, with only the crumbles of cement to testify for the great buildings that once stood. but who was the culprit behind this egregious attack?

though at the age of twelve, i couldn’t even begin to guess, i now know the answer is us. humans are an impressive species: we have traveled to every continent, adapted to countless environments, and innovated to create comfortable means of living. but in the process, we have stolen the colors from nature all around the globe, just as we did that coral reef. our trail of white has penetrated the forests, the oceans, the grasslands, and spread like a wild disease. i, too, have left a white footprint, so i have a responsibility to right these wrongs, to repaint those colors, and to preserve the ones that remain. some question why i should care. the answer is simple: this planet is my home, my birthplace. and that, in and of itself, is an inseparable bond and a timeless connection. nature has allowed me my life, so i have no right to deny its life. as jane goodall once said, “if we kill off the wild, then we are killing a part of our souls.” this is my soul—our soul. i know that i alone cannot protect this soul, so i will not make a promise that i cannot fulfill. but this promise i will make: i will do what i can do.

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