chocolate comes from the cacao tree, which is grown in parts of south america, africa and indonesia.(开头不能一上来就直接介绍cacao tree,而是通过主题词chocolate引出，否则显得太唐突)

?流程图特点之一：介绍过程要使用一般现在时】

?流程图特点之二：大量使用定语从句，将有关联的两句话连接。】

?流程图特点之三：大量使用被动语态】the tree produces large red pods which contain white cocoa beans.

?流程图特点之四：使用一些表示顺序的连接词】when the pods are ripe, they are harvested, the beans are removed and they are fermented for several days in large wooden boxes.(三个句子的并列：句子a,句子b and 句子c。)

during the fermenting process, the beans turn brown.

?流程图特点之五：要适当地添加个别图中没有交代但能从图片中直接读出来的一些内容，否则可能达不到字数要求。但是一定要把握尺度，千万不要加上自己的主观观点，否则会扣分】

next, the brown beans are spread in the sun to dry. they are then put in large sacks and transported by train or lorry. after this, the beans are taken to a chocolate factory where they are roasted in an oven at temperatures of between 250 and 350 degree celsius.

after being roasted, the beans are crushed and the outer shell is removed. this part is not needed for making chocolate. finally, the inner part of the bean is pressed and liquid chocolate is produced.

?流程图特点之六：一般不需要写总结】

?满分范文】

the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry can be outlined in seven consecutive steps. first the raw material, clay, which was just below the surface of soil in certain clay-rich areas has to be dug up by a digger.

then the lumps of clay are placed on a metal grid in order to break up the big chunks of clay into much smaller areas, which fall through the metal grid onto a roller, whose motion further segregates the bits of clay. sand and water are added to make a homogenous mixture, which is then either formed in moulds or cut into brick-shaped pieces by means of a wire cutter.

those fresh bricks are then kept in a drying oven for at least 24 and a maximum of 48 hours, several dozens if not hundreds of bricks at a time. the dried bricks are then transferred to a so-called kiln, another type of high temperature oven. first they are kept at a moderate temperature of 200 ℃ -1300 ℃. this process is followed by cooling down the finished bricks for 48 to 72 hours in a cooling chamber.

once the bricks have cooled down and have become hard, they get packaged and delivered to their final destination, be it a building site or storage.

(215 words)

?考官评语】

band 9

this response fully satisfies the requirements of the task. all key features of each stage of the process are appropriately and accurately presented. an excellent overview is given at the beginning of the response and this skilfully incorporates part of the rubric, changing the grammatical function, to give a brief summary of the whole process. the message is very easy to read, with seamless cohesion that attracts no attention. paragraphing, linking and referencing are all skilfully managed. the language used is very fluent and sophisticated. a wide range of vocabulary and structures are used with full flexibility and accuracy. only rare minor squo;slipssquo; can be found and these do not detract from the high rating.

由此可见，在雅思小作文流程图中，需要特别注意的地方是很多的，但同时这也意味着当烤鸭们把这些特别注意的地方搞定就会是一篇高分的经典文章。

小编的体会：雅思写作就像是一个顽固的钉子户，牢牢钉在了很多烤鸭通往海外留学的路途上，它绕不开，又通不过，似乎金钱都收买不了。今天，从雅思官方搬来一篇干货雅思写作解密，为大家带来一点拔除这个写作钉子户的建议。

似乎很多小伙伴都认为写作=语法+词汇就是写作高手们的修炼秘籍，其实非也非也，一篇没有语法错误并伴有各式大词好词的作文可并不一定就能得到高分呢。其实，他们忽略了雅思考试中考核写作能力的真正标准。下面，我们就按照雅思官方评分标准为大家剖析中国烤鸭常见写作的弊病。

你真的有效完成了雅思写作任务吗?

典型症状

背模板、搬范文，张冠李戴，文不对题;

开头冗长凑字数，言之无物;

通篇内容空洞，没有按照题目要求进行描述和归纳(小作文)或论述(大作文)。

主要病因

也许是受到中文写作思维惯性的影响，许多小伙伴习惯性的在文章的开篇堆叠各种华丽词句，但读起来会发现大段文字绕来绕去却并没有进入主题，又或是因为过分迷恋依赖模板、范文内的格式和句型，却忽略了考试题目中实际的要求而导致说废话。大家有没有发现中文里这种由大及小、由远及近的迂回做法常导致观点不清晰，而英文采用直线型切题的写作方式，开门见山很重要，把最重要的观点放在最前面，然后辅助以数据、论据等，这样可以确保在有限的篇幅和时间内完成沟通的交流目的。

二是不能准确领悟题目的要求，导致写作起来不切题，也就无从完成写作任务。

仔细阅读雅思官方评分标准写作部分，小作文要求能否有效地找到信息中关键的内容并对之进行描述和写作，考的是描述能力。在短短的150字左右的篇幅内，想要把图表内的每个信息都进行描述是不可能、也是不必要的，关键的是要把这些信息分组，然后挑出最重要的信息(比如最高的、最低的等)突出表述，最后进行归纳总结、简述趋势。

就大作文来说，主要考察论点是否切中题目的要求、论证过程是否完整、论点是否得到了论据的支持;观点是否清晰和有效，考的是论述能力。其实，任何考试作文题考的都是写作能力，而不是考你的观点有多么正确。正所谓论之有据，中文写作如此，英文写作也不例外，但中国烤鸭往往落入费尽心思挖论点的误区，而忽略了使用论据来证明自己的论点。此外，要把观点表述得清晰有效也很考功夫。英文写作中注重言简意赅，特别是在篇幅有限的考试写作的环境下，更需要大家将自己的观点提纲挈领地表述出来，并通过使用主题句(每段的开头或结尾)或者是标志性词汇(如thefirst/second/…/last reason is等)来清晰明了地指示出自己的观点。

对症下药

平时多进行英文阅读，重点可以看看两类文章，一是经济类的，看看人家是如何把数据进行分组、对比、归纳的，二是观点性的，学习人家如何呈现和分析观点。最关键的是不要光看就算，要做有心人，把文章中实用性的句式、词汇、表达方法摘抄下来，这样才能日后为我所用。

在考试的时候不要吝惜分析题目的时间，花5分钟好好看清题目要求，把握好写作任务到底是什么—特别是大作文，把文章稍作计划再开始下笔，这样会达到事半功倍的效果。

缺乏连贯性、逻辑混乱

典型症状

东一句，西一句，句子之间没有关联;分段能力欠缺，不能把一个主题或观点的内容集中在一个段落;很少使用关联词、标志性词汇，组织比较松散。

主要病因

在考试时间的压力下，许多小伙伴都匆忙下笔，想到哪儿写到哪儿，导致整个文章结构松散，即便是字字珠玑，但也让阅读者很难找到句与句之间、段落与段落之间的逻辑关系，读起来费尽，那么通过写作达到交流的目的也就无从谈起。

中文里很少或几乎不用形式连接手段，只是将句与句排列起来，依赖语义让读者去了解其内在关系，所以中国烤鸭的文章常给人以条例不清的印象。英文写作则注重语句之间的连贯性和逻辑关联，其表现形式就是使用关联词、标志性词汇，它们是把散落的珍珠串起来的细线。现在小伙伴们逐渐注意到了这个方面，不过偏向集中在段落之间(如使用first/ second/…等)，但在句际、句内的逻辑关系连接尚比较缺乏，只是简单地套用中文句法，句际句内用逗号而非关系词连接，导致句法出错而被扣分。

对症下药

雅思写作讲究一定的格式和规范，注重理清写作的思路要从平时练起，建议大家在平时练习的时候不要光注重写，也要注重分析自己的文章—回过头来看看有没有哪些句子可以重组、哪些地方需要加上关联词/标志性词汇来加强连贯性。

在考试的时候，下笔之前应该先计划一下写作思路，花点时间把文章的架构搭好：如有很多信息点(小作文)或观点(大作文)，一定要好好归纳一下，形成最重要的三四个，然后安排次序—先写/论什么、再写/论什么…，依此类推，这样下笔之后不至于杂乱无章。

雅思5作文篇2

11. a friend will visit beijing. you will meet him at airport. but for some reason, you have to be late. explain the reason. since you haven't meet each other, tell the friend where you will meet and how to recognize each other.

12. more and more children's writing & math ability are affected by computers and calculators. we should limit the use of those tools. disagree or agree.

13. you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital. you received many cards and letters from your classmates. write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time.

14. some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in home at the same time. they also suggest that the government should give the salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children.

雅思5作文篇3

environmental problems are as big as not for individual country or individual people to address. in other word, we have reached the stage that environmental problems be solved for international view. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

in recent years, many nations have become more aware of the environmental issues each nation faces, such as air and water pollution. the question is, are the environmental issues a national problem or an international problem?

it is my belief that the environmental issues have grown to the point of becoming an international problem needing international cooperation to resolve. because of the differences in environmental policies, resources and technology, international cooperation could provide quicker results and have a greater impact on bringing resolution to environmental problems for nations of differing environmental policies and of lesser resources and technology. by pooling international resources and technology to address the environmental problems, the disadvantaged nations are provided the assistance needed. otherwise their environmental conditions deteriorate ultimately affecting the resources and environment of the world as a whole. one of the difficulities to an international resolution to environmental issues is the difference in individual nations view and policies toward environmental protection.

in order for international cooperation to occur and succeed, the nations of the world must submit themselved to international standards and supervision by an international commission elected by the participating nations of the world. all members must agree to abide by the standards established. the environmental issues facing each country are not unrelated to the well being of the rest of the world. the impact is long term and international in scope. without international cooperation and agreement to address such environmental issues as glacial melting at the south pole, depletion of the ozone layer, water pollution, air polution, etc., the environmental conditions of the world will deteriorate to the detriment of every nation, not just those that ignore or lack the resources and technology to resolve their individual environmental problems.

as part of the same planet, it is the responsibility of each individual and nation to protect the global environment. only international cooperation will provide the timely solutions and the effectiveness needed to stop the deteriorating global environment.

雅思5作文篇4

20个雅思写作基础作文题目集锦

1。

you are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus。

one day you find something wrong with your accommodation。

so you write a letter to the house officer to tell them what happened， the reason you think， what you decide to do， and whether if it is right。

2。

it is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects， for instance， there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places， because there are more important thing to do。

whats you opinion？ do you agree or disagree with it？

3。

writing to an english speaking college about qualification， accommodation， fee， what courses do you want to choose and why。

4。

participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development。

5。

you have left college。

but you didnt say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a course at that time。

write a letter to him to appology and tell hem how you spend that days before you leave and how you get home。

then invite him to visit you。

6。

some people say the parents should except school to conduct their childrens behavior and tell them what is right or wrong。

others say schools should take this responsibility。

please give your point about it。

7。

write to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has sth wrong。

tell them the problems of the car you rent from the agency and your requiring。

8。

as the developing countries and the third world countries， there are a funds， how to use it？ invest in the basic education or in the high－technology， for instance， computer？ whats your opinion？

9。

you are a foreign student。

write to the student union， introduce your hobbies and interests and ask information of clubs and societies。

you want to join a club or society enjoy your time when you study there。

10。

fast food is developing more and more popular。

it replaces other traditional food。

some people think it is good， some people disagree with it。

whats your opinion about it。

give some reason of your opinion。

11。

a friend will visit beijing。

you will meet him at airport。

but for some reason， you have to be late。

explain the reason。

since you havent meet each other， tell the friend where you will meet and how to recognize each other。

12。

more and more childrens writing math ability are affected by computers and calculators。

we should limit the use of those tools。

disagree or agree。

13。

you have broke your leg and have to stayed in hospital。

you received many cards and letters from your classmates。

write a letter to tell them your detail of your position and thank them at the same time。

14。

some people say that it is impossible for women to be an effective women and to be a good mother in home at the same time。

they also suggest that the government should give the salary to mothers who stay at home to take care of their children。

15。

your friend write to you and tell you that he is hesitating to chose computer or history as his major in university。

write to him and tell him your opinion。

16。

participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical conditions and social development。

17。

you live in a room in college which you share with another student。

you find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting。

they have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you。

write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room nest term。

you would prefer a single room。

explain your reason。

18。

who has responsible for our old people？

19。

write to the agency officer to complain about a rent house by them。

tell them the problems of the house and your requiring。

20。

you read an ad about a sale of a shop in the local newspaper， when you came to buy the goods you wanted， you find the sale had ended。

write to the shop manager and complain about this。

require for the compensation。

雅思5作文篇5

雅思写作怎么准备——失败案例：

topic 1: the happiest moment in your life

in our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily...

topic 2: the population problem

the population problem is a very big problem. for example, in the city centers of shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.

topic 3: is there fairness in todaysquo;s business world?

i think in todaysquo;s society, there is no fairness in the business world. for example, i always chopped when i go out buy things...

topic 4: the advantage of being a nice person

being a niceperson have many advantage. i believe if a people always do bad things, he will get "baoying".

需规避雅思写作开头：废话连篇

典型失败案例：

topic 1: should college students be allowed to get married?

this topic is very interesting. isquo;m very interested in talking about this topic. because isquo;m also a college student and isquo;m not married...

需规避雅思写作开头：偏离主题

典型失败案例：

topic: it is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. to what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

i think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. to have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, english, music tools,and etc. we can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. all in all, we can learn from many places.

需规避雅思写作开头：语法错误

典型失败案例：

topic: if children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?

about this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right.because teach child is parentsquo;s responsibility. so we also punish parents too besides children is also should.

看到这里，肯定有很多烤鸭在问：说了这么多，难到底雅思写作怎么准备?雅思作文怎么开头?下面，官方真题official小着重分享雅思作文怎么开头。

雅思写作怎么准备：现象句

雅思写作考题中会出现一个社会现象，考生的任务就是在自己文章的第一句话将之改写，重述这个社会现象。

e.g.1

nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.why do you think this is happening? what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

it is true that in almost every country today each household and family produces a large amount of waste every week.

套句+同义词替换：more and more= a large amount of

e.g.2

some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old.others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.

what do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?

in many places today, children start primary school at around the age of six or seven.

主被动之间的转换：should be allowed to stay at home = start their primary school.

同义词的替换：until they are six or seven years old = at the age of six or seven.

e.g.3

in some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies.discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people to do this.

it is quite common these days for young people in many countries to have a break from studying after graduating from high school.

主被动之间的转换，以及同义替换：finish high school = graduate from high school.

所以，从上文中可以看出，一般来说，现象句会在最开始加上一个套句，并且加上地点和时间。

雅思大作文开头段经典套句：

1.it is true that......是真实的

2.i tend to agree that… 我同意…

3.it is quite common… …是常见的

4.there is no doubt that… …是毫无疑问的

5.there is no denying that… …是毫无疑问的

6.it is undeniable that… …是毫无疑问的

地点：in many places; in many countries; in many big cities; almost every country/ city/ place

时间：in recent decades/ years; today; these days; recently; nowadays

要素二：点到问题

雅思大作文考题分成两种：report & argumentative.

对于report(题目一般会涉及到why do you think it is important to…how do you think people can tackle this problem.)

在雅思写作中，是要求考生用书面语来表达的，那么问题来了，很多考生就会问雅思写作书面语怎么准备?如何才能写出正式的雅思文章?下面，小编就为大家分享雅思写作书面语怎么准备，以及如何写出雅思正式文章，希望可以帮助到大家。

雅思写作书面语怎么准备——被动句

在正式英语文体中，被动句是被广为使用的。雅思写作考试中，图表分析和议论文都属于比较正式的问题，所以遇到这种题型，我们就应该使用被动句，例：

the millionaire wasmurdered last night

换为：someone murdered the millionaire last night.

雅思写作书面语怎么准备——名词

英语是静态的语言，所以要求在写作中多用名词，小编也认为：在雅思写作中也要多用名词，不过，也要避免名词过多而造成语法处理上的困难。

雅思写作书面语怎么准备——少用人化主语

这里所说的人化主语是指主语以某个人开始，虽然说这样并没有出错，但是要是通篇文章都是这样的句子，就显得幼稚。此外，写作中多用there be句型，这样能显得更加客观而且精炼。如：

go abroad to get better education and find a better job in thefuture

可以改为：there may be problems in study and also in life for young studentsto go abroad in order to get better education and find a better job in the future.

雅思写作书面语怎么准备——避免口语化

雅思写作书面语怎么准备?相信这一条大家都不会有疑问，少用口语化单词和表达，也可以使文章更为书面。

雅思5作文篇6

我们生活在这个美好的地球上，地球妈妈创造了我们人类，还无私的为我们奉献，提供资源。而我们人类却惨无人道的折磨它，它的慷慨奉献却是人类的浪费。因此，为了让地球更美丽，为了让我们能够在更好的环境中生存，我们要精心保护地球，保护地球生态环境!

一.保护树木

绿色是时尚的代名词，绿色是树的代名词，绿色是小溪的欢歌，绿色是花儿的枝叶，绿色象征着勃勃生机。树是人类的朋友，它奉献氧气吸入二氧化碳，为人类净化空气，保持生态平衡，抵御沙化、风尘、赤潮。但是，人们怎么报答它的?滥砍滥伐，是沙漠面积渐渐增大，绿洲随着减少，人类生存的范围也就缩小了。试问那些滥砍滥伐的人，你们的良心还过得去吗?

二.保护水资源

水，滋润万物，与人们的生产生活息息相关。水是甘甜的。但有时又是苦涩的;水是宝贵的，但有时它又泛滥成灾;水是清冽的，但在一些地方它却变得污浊不堪;一切生物都离不开水，但在一些特别需要水的地方，它却变得那样吝啬……水，是生命之源，是任何物质都不可替代的。没有水就没有生命，更谈不上什么文明和发展。当前，由于世界人口的剧增、人类的过度索取和浪费，以及工业污染等原因，世界淡水资源越来越匮乏，人类正面临着严重的水危机。我们作为小学生应该做些什么呢?

三.保护野生动物

野生动物是自然生态系统的重要组成部分，在维护自然生态平衡中的作用及其在社会生活中的地位日益受到广泛重视。保护野生动物，不仅关系到人类的生存与发展，也是衡量一个国家、一个民族文明进步的重要标志之一。全社会要积极行动起来，不乱捕、不滥杀、不滥食野生动物，保护野生动物从餐桌做起，做一个文明守法的公民。

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雅思5作文篇7

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1. you are an university student who are living in the accommodation at the campus. one day you find something wrong with your accommodation. so you write a letter to the house officer to tell them what happened, the reason you think, what you decide to do, and whether if it is right.

2. it is wrong that our government pay more money to the artist projects, for instance, there are more and more paintings and sculptures appearing at the public places, because there are more important thing to do. what's you opinion? do you agree or disagree with it?

3. writing to an english speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.

4. participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical condition and social development.

5. you have left college. but you didn't say goodbye to your friend who live in the room with you because he had a course at that time. write a letter to him to appology and tell hem how you spend that days before you leave and how you get home. then invite him to visit you.

6. some people say the parents should except school to conduct their children's behavior and tell them what is 'right' or 'wrong'. others say schools should take this responsibility. please give your point about it.

7. write to the agency officer and complain about the rent car which has sth wrong. tell them the problems of the car you rent from the agency and your requiring.

8. as the developing countries and the third world countries, there are a funds, how to use it? invest in the basic education or in the high-technology, for instance, computer? what's your opinion?

9. you are a foreign student. write to the student union, introduce your hobbies and interests and ask information of clubs and societies. you want to join a club or society enjoy your time when you study there.

10. fast food is developing more and more popular. it replaces other traditional food. some people think it is good, some people disagree with it. what's your opinion about it. give some reason of your opinion.

12. more and more children's writing & math ability are affected by computers and calculators. we should limit the use of those tools. disagree or agree.

15. your friend write to you and tell you that he is hesitating to chose computer or history as his major in university. write to him and tell him your opinion.

16. participating in a sport is as important for psychological health as it is for physical conditions and social development.

17. you live in a room in college which you share with another student. you find it very difficult to work there because he or she always has friends visiting. they have parties in the room and sometimes borrow your things without asking you. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college and ask for a new room nest term. you would prefer a single room. explain your reason.

18. who has responsible for our old people?

19. write to the agency officer to complain about a rent house by them. tell them the problems of the house and your requiring.

20. you read an ad about a sale of a shop in the local newspaper, when you came to buy the goods you wanted, you find the sale had ended. write to the shop manager and complain about this. require for the compensation.

21. write to an english speaking college about qualification, accommodation, fee, what courses do you want to choose and why.

22. you are accepted as an oversea student by an university. before you go to the university, write to the student officer and ask them sth about the accommodation, the transportation,and the class schedule.

23. you are a history teacher at a high school. you see an ad at the local newspaper to introduce the local museum which coincidens with what you teach now. write to the museum officer and tell them that you want to bring your students to visit it.

24. write a letter to your friend and express thanks for his present which was brought to you during you were ill at the hospital.

25. the first car appeared on british roads in 1888. by the year there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on british roads. alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. what do you think? give reasons for your answer.

26. the threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. the benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. give reasons for your answer.

27. people can do longer expect a job for life. what should individuals and governments do to prepare the current and future environments for different working conditions?

28. as technological innovation brings about rapid changes and retraining becomes a lifelong necessity, industry should take over more and more of the responsibility for education.

29. it is more important for governments to ensure adequate standards of housing, education and health care for their citizens by developing the industrial base than to use their resources to develop the rural areas.

30. business education and training today must promoter environmental awareness.

31. whilst studying abroad provides an opportunity to broaden one's experience, it also presents the danger of negative influences from the host culture.

32. technological advances continue to improve manufacturing efficiency; the weight of a drinks can has come down from thirty-five grams to about fifteen grams, for example, and modern cars and production techniques are much more energy efficient. governments need to control the environment rather than controlling industry, as companies already control their resources very efficiently.

33. training for work is far more important than proving a broad-based education.

34. what steps should a student take in preparing for tertiary education and what would be the benefit of taking such steps?

35. the developed world should lead by example and not insist that aid to the third world is used to develop rural areas.

雅思大作文常见的题型有哪些

一、教育类

a.理论与实践

1.知识和经验的重要性。

2.为什么要上大学。

3.大学理论和实践课程的关系。

4.高中毕业的学生是否应该在去大学前要工作或旅游一年

5.高中生评估和挑战老师，会不会没有尊重没有纪律性。

6.成功人士所需素质是不是必须从大学或相似的科研学术机构中学习。